2: The Raven King 23

June 12th, 2017, 4:00 pm
2: The Raven King 23
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ameoname June 12th, 2017, 8:09 am
Let's say it's partly over, Yoni!
Now listen to the Big Bad Raven King and GET UP!
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portisHeart June 12th, 2017, 4:10 pm
yup, the comfy flight first class is over. happens when one complains. now you can enjoy your human legs again and WALK.. for a few miles, maybe 10-15, give or take XD
ameoname June 12th, 2017, 4:48 pm
@portisHeart: XD haven't seen it that way, you're right!
portisHeart June 12th, 2017, 6:09 pm
@ameoname: well personally, i would still prefer to walk for 15 miles than take the raven express flight from hell heading straight downwards XDD. or maybe just die in peace right there on the ground XD
ameoname June 13th, 2017, 4:46 pm
@portisHeart: to die in peace is not an option right now! XD
portisHeart June 14th, 2017, 4:14 am
@ameoname: seems so. welcome to the raven boot camp XD. you can choose between getting kicked in the ass.. and getting kicked in the ass :D. optional: getting.. you know ^^
AutumnWolf20 June 12th, 2017, 4:18 pm
Yoni's so hurt right now, I'm sad for him. :'(
ameoname June 12th, 2017, 4:49 pm
@AutumnWolf20: he'll thankme later for not letting him die instead XD oh I'm so sadistic with my main character (>_<)"
AutumnWolf20 June 12th, 2017, 8:48 pm
@ameoname: I'm not complaining about that. I'm actually kinda sadistic myself, well, depending on the person that cruelty is being done to.
ameoname June 13th, 2017, 4:45 pm
@AutumnWolf20: now now. let's keep those preferences to ourselves until the time is appropriate XD
AutumnWolf20 June 13th, 2017, 4:45 pm
@ameoname: .....I'm not sure I'll be able to. :P
memoryERROR-13 June 12th, 2017, 6:14 pm
Garvan being like "Do you trust me?" and yoni be like "lol Nope". Yoni doesn't like disney movies :(
Miss (Guest) June 12th, 2017, 8:01 pm
@memoryERROR-13: yeah, but in Yonis defense, he's not being invited on a magical carpet ride, and he already knows he's not a fan of traveling by Rave-copter. And the one time he was in a pretty forest clearing with wild animals, he was jumped by a murder of crows/ravens.

The take away from all of this is that Disney lied and nature is terrifying.
ameoname June 13th, 2017, 4:37 pm
@memoryERROR-13: I know I wouldn't trust him XD after his power move right before the pit fall!
Liv3lafLuv (Guest) June 12th, 2017, 6:54 pm
OOOH~ "Human," huh? *wiggles eyebrows* No one told the Raven King that Yoni is Ratcoon. XD

MY SON IS HURT! QwQ What was that phone number from Hunger Games that air drops medicine?? Seriously. I will AIR DROP medicine for my son.

Garvan needs to bridal carry my Yoni over the threshold of his nest. ^^
ameoname June 13th, 2017, 4:39 pm
@Liv3lafLuv: XDDD you're right! oh this is going to be THE TWIST at the end of the story: Yoni is a Ratcoon XD

do the Hunger Games drones have numbers? You need the remote control!!!
Liv3lafLuv (Guest) June 14th, 2017, 9:17 am
@ameoname: XD Now you've spoiled the ending!! The HORROR~ *fake swoons* :3

*shrugs* I don't know... That's why I asked. Just give me something to contact one of those little drone-things! I will use a smoke signal if I HAVE to. C:
Miss (Guest) June 12th, 2017, 7:50 pm
For some reason, the angle that Yoni has his arm at makes me think his shoulder's dislocated. Or is broken. Really hope it's not either of those. It's probably just sore, but if it's dislocated, it's an easy (if painful) fix. Speaking from experience. Glad those fine feathered fellows at least have the courtesy not to hit a guy while he's down. At this point it kinda looks like they're trying to decide if Yonis actually a member of the fearsome, dangerous race known as humans.

I think what I appreciate most about this chapter overall is the consistency you have with Yonis injuries. He's still got the scratches on his cheek from the end of the last chapter, That rip in his jacket, and all the other marks, dirt and tears are still there. As well as a few More. Really sells the fact that Yonis dealing with some rough stuff right now.

(And hopefully that means it'll be all the better when he finally gets cleaned up and Garvan has his 'oh no he's hot' realization.)
ameoname June 13th, 2017, 4:41 pm
@Miss: oh I'm so greatful I never had any severe bone / joint injuries (>_<)"

And yes, Yoni really doesn't look all too intimidating... but maybe it's just a trick! ya never know with those humans!

aaand yes I try to stay as consictent as possible with his injuries :D things are getting worse and so do Yoni's jacket and face XD
The Orange Cow June 12th, 2017, 10:00 pm
Get to the chopper!
ameoname June 13th, 2017, 4:42 pm
@The Orange Cow: XDDD with Arnold Schwarzenegger accent?
Blakest June 13th, 2017, 2:11 am
Come with me if you want to live
ameoname June 13th, 2017, 4:43 pm
@Blakest: XD why do I have to think of a Zombie Apocalypse movie with your quote?!
kwippo June 13th, 2017, 4:19 pm
How did he not shit his pants? I would most probably faint.
ameoname June 13th, 2017, 4:44 pm
@kwippo: faint: yes
pants: not sure... no one has ever lived to tell me XDDD